Rave is learning to add more detail to her sentences. She edited her writing with her teacher and here is what they came up with.
Remember to wash the bacteria and germs off your hands. If you don't, the germs will make you sick.
Squirt a bit of soap on your hands and rub them together until they are covered with bubbles. Remember to clean the backs of your hands and between your fingers. Dry them with a towel or a dryer.
Now that your hands are nice and beautiful smelling, you are able to eat because you don't have lots and lots of germs on your hands anymore.
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