I was going sky diving and I was fine until I crashed into the middle of the Pacific Ocean. I was floating but I was not safe. Two hours later, I was hungry, thirsty, and tired.
During the night I was getting stung by jelly fish. I thought my life was going to end when I saw a shark...well I thought it was a dangerous shark. It was a log. I slept on it and it saved my life. I felt so lucky.
Finally in the distance, I saw a sailing boat. I called but they could not hear me. So I had to swim to them. When I reached them, they let me in and we sailed to shore.
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Hi Esrah
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story. It sounded like a dangerous adventure. I'm not sure if I'll ever try sky diving!
Mrs Lagitupu
Hi Esrah
ReplyDeleteWhat a really good story! Maybe when you fell into the sea you fell close to where we live in Samoa? Keep up the good work son.
love Aunty Teuila
Hi Esrah,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story too! Who knew you were such a creative story teller!!!
Hi Esrah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Caitlyn Lord. I am a student from the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama in the United States. I am in an educational media course taught by Dr. John Strange. I really enjoyed your story. It was very creative. Keep up the good work. Being creative is a very good thing, it will help you later in life. Being creative can lead to so many great things!
My name is May Krasovich. I am a student of Dr.Strange's EDM310 class at the University of South Alabama. My major is Elementary Education I remember when I use to have to write creative stories for school. Those were always the most fun to write. You did a good job with your choice of words and your punctuation was good as well.
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