Friday, May 21, 2010

Levi - Don't Get Burned

4 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Levi,
    You are so clever. I really liked the information you gave about what magma is inside the earth's mantle. I also liked the way you read your writing with fluency and expression. I can tell that you have been practicing very hard. Well done and keep up the great writing.

    Miss Lavakula

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  2. Wow Levi,
    I liked the presentation of your facts about magma. Thanks for the warning - I definitely would NOT like to get too close!
    I think you're amazing!

    Love Mum

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  3. Awesome Levi,
    You are right it must be very hot under the earths crust. Your talking and use of descriptive words is excellent. I love the content and your smile. Keep up the great work son.

    Love Dad

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  4. hi its me antonio
    i like your story.Could you please tell rm12 that im sick

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